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In the end was I really?
Contributed by
cryingonmyporch
on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 11:08:30 PM in AEST
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A mother and a father wrapped into one.
Loved and hated by mostly everyone.
A bullet in the head could cure it all.
Which way to run?
When there is nowhere to hide?
In a prison of my own still I am.
My Mother brought me to this world.
You have no idea how many times I thought I should have died.
Two years ago I felt completely sane.
But now all I wish for is rain.
What made you leave me and your child?
Truthfully was I not loveable?
I loved you what am I saying I still do.
In the end what made me the unloveable?
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2003-12-04 23:08:30]
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Re: In the end was I really?
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by MALCOLM9 on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 12:43:39 AM AEST
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| Very cool, good write and congrats on the new child! |
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Re: In the end was I really?
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by CrystalSilence on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 01:07:04 AM AEST
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Excellent Expression!
When times are are hard,life kicks you..just take a look at your lil one,listen to their sleeping breath,hold their smile in your heart and you will feel loveable..even though you already are.But now you have someone who relies on you,loves you unconditionally.
I wish you all the best..and never stop listening,watching.They grow so quickly.
Neat write!!
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Re: In the end was I really?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 04:18:38 PM AEST
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amy
i don't know why you hate me so but this is the only way i know to get ahold of u i really miss u and wish that you would tell me what i did wrong is it that i got married or that i moved off i mean i may not of been there for u all the time but what about when you where having problems with mark and i left at 3 in the morning to be there for you or when you wanted to kill yourself i was there for u u know i want you to come up here with me and visit it will be nice did u really have the baby if so what did u name it and was it a boy or girl i love u girl and really am sorry for whatever i did to u but remember our promise i still didn't have the wedding becouse u are still suposed to be the maid of honer love always
christine millsap
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