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My Own Silence
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 07:20:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In a chamber small
There midset rests
A single chair
Inside this tomb of walls
In solitude
I am all alone there
Two candles on either side
One dormant and melted
The other dim and faded
Layered shadows confide
As my story is perpetuated
As I fall further jaded
At the window there's a tap
Like that of a nightbird's talon
On the glass, from thunder he flees
It sounds as the needle of a phonograph
Spinning in the corner of the room
As it plays my symphony
In this concrete coffin
Serpentine lightning pierces
Igniting this solitary lair
Oblivious within this place
I hear the rain begin to fall
Still I wait in my electric chair
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2003-12-05 07:20:21]
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Re: My Own Silence
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by P0rNStAr on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 07:54:48 AM AEST
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Great write ~~ detailed ~~
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Re: My Own Silence
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 12:37:26 AM AEST
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Dark, deep, lonely, remorseful, with beautiful imagery. I could almost hear the sounds VS.
A loner all alone in your own thoughts, and yet still aware of what is going on around you.
This is a very good poem...i could feel the depth in you soul!
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Re: My Own Silence
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 01:01:18 AM AEST
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Knowing mostly what is going on about you but them not knowing what is going on with you. Alone. Yes...silence...yes...good write.
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