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No More!
Contributed by
bigtig6269
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Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 12:10:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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It's funny. You want to be with me at any cost.
Sorry Dah'lin, but you're hopelessly lost.
You want me now, what about back then?
Yeah, I still remember way back when.
You cut me deep like a knife through hot butter.
That's okay, I came back from the gutter.
Changed a lil' bit, grew up a lot
Come on, don't tell me you forgot.
I hit the weight room, got a lot tougher
So now you want to be my one true lover?
What's wrong? Back then, you were too good for me, right?
Did you honestly think I'd stay down? I get up and fight.
"Come on, we were kids, I was only 13!"
Yeah, may be to you that's how it seemed.
But to me, it meant a lot more.
You ripped out my heart and threw it on the floor.
That's okay, thanks, I learn from my mistakes
And now to get me back, You'll do whatever it takes.
Like Edgar Allen Poe, with a lost love Lenore,
You won't play me like a drum anymore.
Copyright ©
bigtig6269
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2003-12-05 12:10:52]
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Re: No More!
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by MissLee on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 12:14:08 PM AEST
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Re: No More!
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 12:54:25 AM AEST
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Woooo! You tell them!!! You go!!! Excellent write.
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Re: No More!
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by Solmyr1404 on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:18:29 AM AEST
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HOLY S**T man! that's some powerful stuff. as long as i've known you, i didn't know anything about that or that you could write THAT good. Damn.
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