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'' Life ''
Contributed by
trisha
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Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 12:57:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm Not Prefect
I'm Still Young
I Do UnderStand
I Have A Lot To Learn.
Life Isn't Prefect
Life's About Learning.
Life's About Taken
Chance's.
Copyright ©
trisha
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2003-12-05 12:57:24]
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Re: '' Life ''
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 03:35:41 PM AEST
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| yup:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: '' Life ''
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 12:25:32 AM AEST
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EXACTLY! You said it here - right here in your write. Very good message and a good write. Take care.
Emma. |
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Re: '' Life ''
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 02:12:12 PM AEST
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| Elegently done...short...simple...to the point. I like your work...you seem to have conveyed your meaning in an economy of words and style. What you are saying is partially true too...life is a journey to be experienced and it is about learning...but maybe...we must not spend too much time learning and taking chances for oft times life can also be too short...maybe there comes a time that we must master life as soon as posible..or not...he he |
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Re: '' Life ''
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by Zee on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 03:46:14 PM AEST
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Thats perfectly said!! Well written!
zee |
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Re: '' Life ''
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 12:44:26 AM AEST
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Very smart girl u r.
Most ladies-n-gents your age aren't thinking 'bout life that much.
shows wisdom on your part.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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