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Counting colors
Contributed by
lessa
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Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 10:33:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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counting colors in a rainbow
counting the variables of black in the sky
darkness falls at 10am
life is short mine especially
time goes by as u watch raindrops float by
clocks keep ticking bring my insanity closer
tick tock tick tock HELP ME NOW!!!
darkness falls time keeps creeping
someone let me out of this cell called life
i hate living, i hate sleeping, i hate it all please someone help me
suicide is not an option
blood is but a dream sore.
cant these bars of craziness be broken by anything at all
blister pop, tick tock
kill me now for i want it done
make the time stop make the darkness end
but in my heart i know it wont
welcome to my life
it's all just a cell made of the darkness and cold.
tick tock tick tock
i'll just count the different colors on the wall
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lessa
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2003-12-05 22:33:00]
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Re: Counting colors
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 12:10:04 AM AEST
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| Well, then. Groovy write. |
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Re: Counting colors
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by Brians_Sweety on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 04:33:18 PM AEST
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Great poem, but you know what I think about the suicide and the "kill me now" so I don't even have to tell you. I still love ya though!
Darlene |
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