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Your Prison
Contributed by
juliETTE
on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 12:15:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I have visions of you trapped in your cage,
Trying to extinguish this fiery rage,
Skimming your past for a clue as to why
Your only chance at redemption is to lay down and die-.
Hanging your head to disguise inner shame,
Knowing deep down there is nobody to blame,
Your future, mere ashes slipping through tired hands-
Your world now, the fiercest storm you must try to withstand.
You’ve always been so violent, now lost without your fight
Courage now cowardice, how do you face the nights?
Count down your days but the time grows no shorter-
For the rest of your life to live as hells own boarder,
Seems so much punishment for so little a man-
Who from the beginning felt eternally damned.
Copyright ©
juliETTE
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2003-12-06 12:15:24]
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Re: Your Prison
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 01:02:29 PM AEST
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| Wow. This peom amazed me. It reminds me of me to a point well maybe my past. I really loved this. |
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Re: Your Prison
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by SkYYBLu on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 01:39:35 PM AEST
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| This was an amazing poem. Keep writing! |
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Re: Your Prison
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by irshprnss on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 05:59:55 PM AEST
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This is a great write. Thank you for the chance to read it!
Diana |
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Re: Your Prison
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 09:30:05 PM AEST
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another wow write, very well said and a nice feeling of bitterness.
Drunks appeciate bitterness.
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Re: Your Prison
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:20:59 AM AEST
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| nice words and use of emotion short but sweet thankuxgripx |
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