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crimson
Contributed by
Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre
on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 02:49:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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can i steal love?....can i do that?... i cannot bring myself to try.. someone please stop me now as i have lost my destination
my sight blurred and my mind numb please open my eyes please let me love i crave i yearn i plead and yet i get nothing
have i been awful? have i been rude? why so horrible...where is the truth? show the light on my shadowed world so that i may see again.
so tired of this a constant whirl all i ever think about, i just wanted release i scream and get nothing i ask and get nothing i will soon die and have nothing
cant breathe...thoughts crazed and hell bent on making me scream..how i crave to scream! yet i stay silent in this empty body... emotion long abandoned, left with a fake outlook nothing is real anymore pain isnt a release anymore what am i to do? see if my sword is a good substitute for this razor?..will i feel then?..
such an idiot...to think i could lie and have everything i almost did though..messed it up too soon i should have known my luck.. i should have known by now..
i cannot hide my soul forever nobody should keep this burden, this hurt yet nobody will listen so i just sit here.....waiting....
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Re: crimson
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 03:11:34 PM AEST (User
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Ouch how I can relate to this. You write very well. If you need someone you can pm me. I think this was a very good write. |
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