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LONELY PETAL
Contributed by
Baby`Fallen`angel
on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 06:30:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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What is this I find
Entered into my life
From this field of hay,
A single petal,
Red and blushed it is
Layed upon the ground
To be embraced
By gentle fingers tips.
How was it that it came to me,
This one sweet single petal?
I search for the flower
From which it was born,
Not finding it at all,
Nothing I find within this field
Could have produced this thing,
Of such beauty it is,
Only the seeded heads of the grasses
Nod at me in acknowledgment,
Of its presence.
Gently holding this petal
Close to this beaten heart
Lay my head upon the ground
To dream
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Baby`Fallen`angel
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2002-08-28 06:30:21]
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Re: LONELY PETAL
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 11:30:05 AM AEST
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Sorry to be late commenting on this lovely write Jillian, I don't know how it slipped through without more recognition?
It's wonderful and well written
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: LONELY PETAL
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by dantoad on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 09:37:34 AM AEST
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this was a really good write, i really felt this, keep it up!
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Re: LONELY PETAL
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by dantoad on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 09:38:06 AM AEST
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this was a really good write, i really felt this, keep it up!
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