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I'm on the outside
Contributed by
floo
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Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 06:59:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'm on the outside
Looking in at a time that was
A time that has passed
A time which will not come again
And I feel... just feel
Looking further inside
Seeing what my heart wants the most
A time where I was there
A time where you needed me... wanted me
Still on the outside
Never allowed back on the inside
Still I feel... always feeling
Pain, sorrow, fear, regret... hope
On the outside... in the cold... alone
But still, looking on the inside
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floo
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2003-12-06 18:59:37]
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Re: I'm on the outside
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 08:08:28 PM AEST
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Hi floo,
Very good work here.
At times it's hard to positive when there is the enemy 4-ever trying to still ones joy.
Great work!
I can see this as a song
.and I feel....just feel
Looking further inside.......
Keep up the good work!
Deep masterpeice.
peace, joy, luv,
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