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lover's portrait
Contributed by
Merry
on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 10:12:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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tracing paper
faint outline
carelessly drawn
portrait of you
reclining
soft pastel sketch
breath of spring
caught on paper
full of promises
unkept
black and wihite
ink scratched
into obedience
the harshness
contained
the delightful ooze
of color runs
into a stranger
unexpected
love
gmm2003
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Merry
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2003-12-06 22:12:01]
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Re: lover's portrait
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by juliette on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 10:34:51 PM AEST
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I can't even tell you what I like about this - but it was such a good read! Great job........Thanks for sharing!
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Re: lover's portrait
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 11:29:57 PM AEST
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"the delightful ooze
of color runs
into a stranger
unexpected
love"
Excellent!!
I paint too sometimes.But not with a brush ;)
I really enjoyed this !
LW |
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Re: lover's portrait
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 11:09:17 AM AEST
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You paint such a vivd picture. I truely ejnoy your writing.
Have one on me
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