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Painted Flesh
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 11:34:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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"sduisez mon esprit et mon corps est vous, trouvent mon me et je suis vous pour toujours "
"Seduce my mind and my body is yours,Find my soul and I'm yours for always"
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Vibrant colours cover my body,
smoothed over by my hands
I fall into the canvas,
Paint my soul in dance....
Phantasms contort and attempt their deceit
Yet my soul paints only in depth
Pouring from my very essence
Revealing secrets well kept
Bleeding in the candlelight
Colours run,splashed with tears
An abstraction of your presence
As in swirls your face appears
Dipped in illumination
You come forth with golden mouth
From the centre of my canvas
Drawing all my insides out
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-12-06 23:34:09]
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Re: Painted Flesh
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 11:39:44 PM AEST
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OH YES THIS IS SOOOOOOOO EXCELLENT!!!!
I LOVE THIS..... REALLY. |
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Re: Painted Flesh
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 12:56:46 AM AEST
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Very colorful...:>)
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Re: Painted Flesh
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 07:46:55 PM AEST
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| This was an odd one from you hon. I liked it. It was very interesting. It definetly painted me a picture. |
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Re: Painted Flesh
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 08:40:56 PM AEST
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| Spellbinding, and full of mystery. A beautiful write. |
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Re: Painted Flesh
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:49:31 PM AEST
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A beautiful release. Thank you for sharing.
P.G. ;-) |
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Re: Painted Flesh
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:32:16 AM AEST
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That is nice. Very nice.
Stitch |
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