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Sweet Honeysuckle
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 11:36:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Springtime love is all around
It's perfume scents the air
The sweet sweet smell of romance
Sunny days without a care
My love,take me to higher ground
Let us lie beneath the sun
Share your honeysuckle kisses
And please don't stop at one
Dandelions sway in the breeze
So warm here in the grass
Just me and you,each kiss so new
Softly,slowly,make this last
Lay your face against the warmth
That is held here in my hair
Whisper soft with honeysuckle breath
Live these moments as we dare
The earth, our tender mattress
Is warmed from where we lie
Side by side,just holding hands
Looking to the bluest sky
We close our eyes and drift away
Yet only to each others minds
As there in honeysuckle fantasies
We leave the world behind
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-12-06 23:36:58]
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Re: Sweet Honeysuckle
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 07:48:32 PM AEST
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| This was sweet. I liked the imagery very much. I was wondering in the beginning how sensual you where going to make it but you kept it soft and sweet. Nice. |
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Re: Sweet Honeysuckle
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 08:43:49 PM AEST
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Honeysuckle fantasies, beautiful thoughts. You write of romance like no other.
Time for a drink
the Drunk |
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Re: Sweet Honeysuckle
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 01:44:37 AM AEST
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| A smile is now upon my face, my mind is in the clouds, and all because I read those words, and I read them aloud. Great work, thank you very much for sharing. |
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Re: Sweet Honeysuckle
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by Menelaus on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 04:46:17 AM AEST
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Such bliss that we seek.
Such love that we yearn for
such dreams that will never return... |
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