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The pain I saw in your eyes
Contributed by
Randyjohnson
on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 07:59:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I sit home all alone day after day.
I was unfaithful and you went away.
I now know that love is the greatest thing two people can share.
Tears come to my eyes when I go to bed and you're no longer there.
I wasn't satisfied with just one woman. I had to have another.
I destroyed what we had because I took a lover.
The pain i saw in your eyes was indescribable.
We could've been together forever but I was a fool.
Now you're remarried and it's something my heart can not take.
I lost the love of my life because of my mistake.
Copyright ©
Randyjohnson
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2003-12-07 19:59:15]
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Re: The pain I saw in your eyes
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 09:02:06 PM AEST
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| Very well written. Great job. |
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Re: The pain I saw in your eyes
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 10:47:24 PM AEST
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Good write.... so sad..hope it is fictional...
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Re: The pain I saw in your eyes
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:43:31 AM AEST
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*fingers crossed* like jenni :)
This is so full of regret and sorrow.
I love it!!
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Re: The pain I saw in your eyes
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by blueheart on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 02:25:13 AM AEST
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| Very well written, hope its not something youre going through. |
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Re: The pain I saw in your eyes
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by EmSal on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 08:07:15 AM AEST
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Awww this is sad but also beautiful, the realisation even though it is too late...if only others will realise this too. Great write, spoke to me. All the best.
Emma. |
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Re: The pain I saw in your eyes
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 06:49:26 PM AEST
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| This single act can hurt incredibly badly no matter which side you are standing on... I liked the write very much. |
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Re: The pain I saw in your eyes
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 01:38:23 PM AEST
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It's no use crying over spilt milk go and find another bottle.
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