|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
out of focus
Contributed by
Merry
on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 09:11:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
odds were against us
we kept throwing the dice
while we sought oblivion
in the bottom of a glass
pushing each other down
vying for position
wanting what had been neglected
taking what we could
before it was all gone
faint memory of promises
broken so long ago
not worth mentioning anymore
drunken adversaries
blurry - out of focus
a bad photograph
taken as we parted company
gmm2003
Copyright ©
Merry
... [
2003-12-07 21:11:56]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: out of focus
(User Rating: 1 )
by Three_Blind_Mice on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 09:20:24 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Your writes are so damn true to life. No wonder I drink so much. Once again I am left thinking, always thinking.
For that you owe me a drink
the Drunk |
|
|
Re: out of focus
(User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 09:29:50 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You are brilliant at expressing yourself..your every line is just so thought provoking.I love that in a read.
Excellent!
Sharon |
|
|
Re: out of focus
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 11:08:00 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Dear Mer, I need your big chair, so I can sit in it and think awhile. Your wonderful poems have me reeling, and sometimes stealing...just a glimpse here and there of you....I love your poems Mer, everything you write about comes in loud and clear.
I'm not sure about this one, however, hope everything is all right with you, 'cause I love you too!
ConSue |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
