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Till death do we part
Contributed by
mercedes
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Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 02:52:45 AM in AEST
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
Till death do we part
I said I do
With all my heart
I gave myself to you
Promised to always be faithful
But somehow I failed to be true
I committed the ultimat sin
It was a temptation I couldnt resist
Although it is you I love
It was another I kissed
I was sure we were thru
You would never stay after this
I broke one vow, i would not break another
With the gun in my mouth, I'm sure not to miss
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2003-12-08 02:52:45]
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Re: Till death do we part
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 02:56:48 AM AEST
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| Wow. I liked this one. I still wouldn't do that. I told you not to play with my gun. *Wrestles the gun away from mercedes* |
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Re: Till death do we part
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 03:12:07 AM AEST
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Very good writng!
I get the message loud-n-clear altho I've never heard it like this.
Please don't take this as anything funny 'bout suicide but I do see the humor.
I imagene we all feel this way from time to time but please don't. Life is too short at best.
U r a really good writer and there's plenty of writing 2 do.
Again, I wasn't laughing at u.
peace, joy, luv, hope,
emy
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Re: Till death do we part
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by mercedes on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 03:18:17 AM AEST
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As always you made me smile Jeff. And Emy thanks for the comment and truth be told, this was supposed to be humorous in a dark sort of way. To clear things up, im not suicidal at the moment, this is something that happened in the recent past and im still just dealing with it in my own way. Thanks though.
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Re: Till death do we part
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 01:20:13 PM AEST
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Christina, I was so glad you didn't do it.
In our young lives we are so full of hormones we are bound to make a few mistakes. Nobody is blameless. It's NORMAL.
See my life in one I wrote titled "He's not the only one" it might help.
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