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Dreams Of Wind Untamed
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 03:23:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Beautifully simplistic Relaxing and all that goes Finding hidden endings
No one ever knows
Tragically horrific Broken hearts undone Edging so much closer
The battle's just begun
Guiding light surrounds us Leading us down the path Bending out the darkness
And heeding the chamber's aftermath
Love for an issue Acknowledge I'm here today Find myself a beginning
A feeling keeps the wolves at bay
Oh, crashing in the moonlight As beautiful as your skin was Gleaming eyes surround me
Tears meet the ground as the leaf of a tree does
A blindness that takes hold of me Feelings that refuse to be named A piece of the puzzle missing
And a mystery that is never tamed
Smiles that can crush you Those crinkled eyes that would A desire burns forever
And, burning is how I should
Gliding past forever Points leading through dismay Stars that shine on always
Meet your lips for great display
Wind that fights forever Tearing through the trees A feeling that grips our instincts
And brings me to my knees
Home is where I feel you Simplistic as you should Beautifully intuitive
I give you all I ever could...
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Exodus-On-Life
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2003-12-08 03:23:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dreams Of Wind Untamed
(User Rating: 1 ) by infedelity_hurts on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 03:57:03 AM AEST (User
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hmmm... interesting setup... i like it alot... please look at mine... and tell me wat you think |
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Re: Dreams Of Wind Untamed
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 05:51:19 AM AEST (User
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Great write ... love the words, love how you set it out ... well done ... Jan |
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