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Fading Grace
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 09:31:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Drifting sands graze her burning flesh
Grains of storms from long ago
She is calling out,falling now
To a past she used to know
A single flower by her golden face
Bends to touch her tears
To drink from all thats left of a soul
Hollowed through the years
Upon the winds of yesterday
Comes calling,a mournful cry
The burnt out seed of a rose gone wrong
Planted,then left to die
She remembers for a moment
When to her,a freedom was born
Awaiting fragrant petals
Only to be dressed in thorns
A sigh so very tender
Falls from its hiding place
Calling out,falling now
To the memory of fading grace
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LovingWhispers
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2003-12-08 09:31:44]
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Re: Fading Grace
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by blueheart on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 09:36:04 AM AEST
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| Rather dark yet beautifully written. You have amazing talent. |
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Re: Fading Grace
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 10:07:00 AM AEST
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very lovely my friend and I feel like that rose...
Shari |
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Re: Fading Grace
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 10:25:29 AM AEST
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| I love the imagery of this one. Just amazing. |
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Re: Fading Grace
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 03:08:28 PM AEST
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| the heart, its amazing the wonderful places it takes us, in tears, or joy. what a beautiful poem, kang'i |
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Re: Fading Grace
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 03:22:00 PM AEST
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| Lovely!!!! |
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Re: Fading Grace
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 08:16:19 PM AEST
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| Very good! This has a beautiful, lonely feel to it, which always gets to me, as I am often lonely. |
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Re: Fading Grace
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:41:53 PM AEST
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Everything will always be fine, as long as you look forward!! Great write. Thank you.
P.G. ;-) |
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