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Time Stands Still For Rapture
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 03:07:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Time stands still for rapture
And thoughts invade our heads
Lay us down for capture
Dreams and rested beds
Closing eyes surround us
Grasping all our dreams
Thinking always of this
And of what it never seems
Float away with music
Chills running constantly
Shiver in the beautiful cold
Clouds of breath are holding me
Drive away now
Rolling the windows down
Let the death of cold enclose us
Frost running across the ground
Tides have turned against me
Losing the heat of day
Your voice has already surrounded me
And I'm awaiting the things it will say
Eyes bleed out the sorrow
The tears float to the air
Freezing as the snow comes down
Lights that are always there
Time stands still for rapture
Oh, the thoughts you invade in my head
Lay me down for your capture
And I lie awake in this bed
Ticking clocks surround me
Time that stops for no one
Losing all my inhibitions
Standing still for someone
Letters hold unwritten
Passing themselves through time
I will hold myself against it
And the pressure felt is mine
Take hold of your examples
Fight those feelings as you should
Faking smiles shatter
Oh, like you ever could
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2003-12-08 15:07:01]
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Re: Time Stands Still For Rapture
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by Eve on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 06:46:24 PM AEST
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Can't explain why, but I love this. Whatever it was, the poem stole my breath and clouded my mind, because I think I forgot how to breathe when I read it.
Keep writing,
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Re: Time Stands Still For Rapture
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 11:11:48 PM AEST
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Eyes bleed out the sorrow
I loved all this, but especially that line this was so unbelievably great. Wow... amazing
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