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I Cry Because
Contributed by
misstressdistrubed
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Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 05:02:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I cry because Im full of pain
You say you understand
But you really dont
You say it will be ok
But I know it wont
You say it will go away
But its never hurt this way
You tell me you wont let it happen again
But its already happened now
I cry because it's all I can do
I cry because I am full of anger
You say things will be the same
But everything has changed
You tell me Ill get through it
But how can I move on
You say Ill forget it
But you know thats a lie
I cry because I cant stop
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2003-12-08 17:02:17]
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Re: I Cry Because
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by MissLee on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 05:25:23 PM AEST
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| Good job hon, keep writing! |
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Re: I Cry Because
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by loopylou on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 05:47:24 PM AEST
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| awww sad but one day you will be ready to wipe away the tears......but for now its best to let it out |
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Re: I Cry Because
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by nightrider on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 06:30:22 PM AEST
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| i really like this. it just puts your emotions out in a very simple, easy to understand way. i relate so much, it almost hurts... keep your chin up, and im always around if you need to talk. |
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Re: I Cry Because
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 10:07:24 PM AEST
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wow...this poem is really simple in a nice way..
i really liked it
you expressed your feelings really well and clearly...
in a simple easy 2 understand way...
great write
keep it up |
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