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Screams of pain
Contributed by
amora
on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 11:47:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Screams of pain
Hear my pain
And hear my cries
See the tears
Poor from these eyes
My scream is piercing
To your ears
What going on in my head
All these screams of fears
You dont know me
No one does
Just leave me alone
I need to see blood
It doesnt hurt
Its soothing
Pouring from my wrists
The blood oozing
Itll be over soon
I need the pain
I need to get threw this
Threw this horrible game
People wonder
Why I do these things
I just need the pain
To take away the sins
Sitting here watching it
I look and smile
Its over now
Ive walked that mile
Over and over again
Itll come my route
Screams and pain
Is what this lifes about
Copyright ©
amora
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2003-12-08 23:47:19]
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Re: Screams of pain
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:03:34 AM AEST
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| I really liked the wording to this one. I liked it. Very dark. Cheer up though. |
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Re: Screams of pain
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by eternal_sorrows on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:58:05 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this piece. I could feel your heart through your words.
ES |
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Re: Screams of pain
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 02:00:11 AM AEST
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YOu can definatley feel the emotion in this write.. very nicely put.. great job
Peace joy and hope
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Re: Screams of pain
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 09:07:31 AM AEST
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Indeed you must hurt. You can never really discribe how you feel, and if you put that much pain down on papaer, you must have so much more inside.
Take care (I mean it...)
David |
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