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Keeper of My Heart
Contributed by
lil_hummingbird
on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 08:21:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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you are the keeper of my heart
no matter what comes my way
I knew this from the start
but now we both have to pay
judgements should never be made
when two people are in love
all memories of the past should fade
like a bird in flight up above
they say it is better to have loved
and lost than to not love at all
but the pain that I have
is much more than any fall
what once was ours
is no longer there
but i cant stop thinking of you
this life is not fair
If all I ever have
are my dreams of you and me
I will cherish them forever
if that is how it has to be
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lil_hummingbird
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2002-07-13 08:21:41]
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Re: Keeper of My Heart
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by Firefly on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 09:31:12 AM AEST
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| well done, lil_hummingbird . One we can all relate to. |
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Re: Keeper of My Heart
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by withpen_inhand on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 11:48:56 AM AEST
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| Very straight forward,and to the point.A feeling plainly spoken,and easily understood. |
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Re: Keeper of My Heart
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by Kassidi on
Sunday, 14th July 2002 @ 05:51:42 AM AEST
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Another great poem. This is so good, but sad.
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Re: Keeper of My Heart
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by lilsmurfy on
Sunday, 14th July 2002 @ 06:11:44 AM AEST
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| sad but well written ..good write :) |
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Re: Keeper of My Heart
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by Paul on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 07:14:41 PM AEST
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| I never agreed with that qoute "it's better to have loved, and lost than no love at all". Seems like a cruel world. When you have someone you care about that much, and you lose them. It only leaves you wondering about them. I like the poem a lot |
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