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Dillusional
Contributed by
SkYYBLu
on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 07:37:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Visions around me disappear into mist
Fog growing thicker
Time standing still
Dillusional of reality and dreams gone away
Disappearing at the thought of you
Rain taunting my broken spirit
Daydreams come to confort me
To tell me that there is still hope
Clinging to them
I have nothing else left
Recolections of you awaken my soul
Creating stirrings within
Unable to accept fate
No miracle will avial me
The only things left in my heart once full
Are torment and misery
Copyright ©
SkYYBLu
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2003-12-09 19:37:59]
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Re: Dillusional
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 09:12:34 PM AEST
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| great poem keep it up. |
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Re: Dillusional
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 09:50:10 PM AEST
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I agree, good work.
hang tuff.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Dillusional
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 11:18:42 PM AEST
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| GREAT WRITE. |
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Re: Dillusional
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by Lessa on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 09:27:10 PM AEST
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| love yet, yet pain, yet death, very thought provocing |
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