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Drenched in Crimson
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 01:08:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Drenched in crimson tears
the abyss drinks in your biggest fears
Swallowing your beautiful dreams
while torturing your soul until your
heart screams
Vanishing through air
while deomns fulfill their lust
trying to escape the wraths clutch
you choke in the cloudy room full of smoke
and burning flesh
JENNA
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PhantomVampyress
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2003-12-10 01:08:41]
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Re: Drenched in Crimson
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by Jeff9Man on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 04:35:15 AM AEST
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| Interesting poem, I like it. I read it and can't help but visualize it. very stirring. |
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Re: Drenched in Crimson
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 11:21:48 AM AEST
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| I do agree it was interesting but your writing style in itself is highy unique. I really enjoy reading your poems though. Had to go into your profile though as I am that far behind... I really really liked the last lines. |
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