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October Rain
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 04:44:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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October Rain
I remember the tears
with yesterdays pain
that dreadful year
of October rain.
Darkened skies
with clouds of grey
gloom which followed
everyday.
Hidden in shadows
fate lurked at me
a game of life
which took three.
With each breeze
of passing wind
fate just laughed
at me again.
Cold wet rain
stained my face
salty tears
I could taste.
As I looked
up to the sky
I could not help
but wonder why.
My soul screamed
with terror and pain
that dreadful year
of October rain.
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2003-12-10 04:44:44]
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Re: October Rain
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 04:47:43 AM AEST
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| Awesome, beautiful, and yet every word in this poem has a sense of soul wrenching pain. Great poem, and hang in there! Awesome work! |
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Re: October Rain
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by Zee on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 03:43:25 PM AEST
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That's something that straight hits our heart!! Very sad but very beautifully expressed!!!Well written!
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