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My Wall
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
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Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 07:16:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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How could one man
Effect me so profoundly?
When Ive done all I can
To build the walls around me?
In this, the longest week past
Ive traveled so far
From the depths of hell so vast
To soaring among the stars
With each of his poems
My heart finds a little hope
My smile now returns
And I feel I could float
Pieces of my wall have crumbled
And fissures are slowly creeping
Although on the pieces Ive stumbled,
Through the cracks, delight is now seeping
How surprising to find
That my means of protection
While hidden safely behind
Also prevented affection
I am now excited to see
With each stones loosening
Every new possibility
And my souls releasing
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2003-12-10 07:16:17]
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Re: My Wall
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 09:40:40 AM AEST
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Defense mechanisms are there to protect us. To let them down would mean to let someone in and it is easier to keep them up, then to take a chance because no one knows what lies ahead. I loved this poem and what you said is so very true.
You have a gift for words...
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Re: My Wall
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 11:32:16 AM AEST
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| very good very good indeed....somtimes walls are good.....but not often!! |
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Re: My Wall
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by Pasta on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 12:10:04 AM AEST
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| It's amazing how things can turn around in a day when one steps back and looks at the big picture. Looking forward to Cancun with a beautiful red head. :-) |
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Re: My Wall
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by 13Hopes on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 12:18:53 PM AEST
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I really think that letting some one behind your walls has a lot to do with trust, but then some times there is no choice, they just step right through them....
Great Write
Cheers
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