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a little bit of paradise
Contributed by
merry
on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 09:06:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the fair wind caresses
the sun blesses
unusual weather
indulge me this time
i am cold from the storm
that took me off course
battered my heart
and washed me ashore
in this paradise lost
i am but a guest
for a moment i pause
in your loving arms rest
gmm2003
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merry
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2003-12-10 09:06:40]
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Re: a little bit of paradise
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 09:33:07 AM AEST
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What you wrote is paradise. Very alluring.
Imagining being a guest in paradise. I loved this poem.
Kie
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Re: a little bit of paradise
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 11:23:14 AM AEST
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| awww what a nice poem great write!! |
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Re: a little bit of paradise
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 11:42:19 AM AEST
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| so beautiful. |
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Re: a little bit of paradise
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 05:15:09 PM AEST
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Felt every word
Very well written
Beautiful
Love
Angelxxx |
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