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The Taste Of the End (white sheet)
Contributed by
Nick_85Ingram
on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 01:29:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Its dark and i cant grasp anything,
not even life,
my heart burnsof fears and regrets,
no break.
I still bleed sorrow, its still very dark,
Dizzy,
the taste of the end is ripping and my wrists and throat like a rusty razor....
ruining something so precious,
blood stains.
I think im dying? not a damn thing left,
No hope, no dreams, no faith, no you....,
god even left me,
i was trying to look the other way,
but my head laid lifeless,
My baby blue eyes are now completely bloodshot,
I cant breathe anymore,
suffacating as the depression is inhaled by my lungs,
consuming all bits of life left,
its still dark....
and i am finally ok with the fact,
that i really am dying.
No worth and want in my life,
failure,
No coming back,regretful sinful, ways stuck in, and everyday i live in is a sin,
Nothing within,
No help,
Death throws a sheet over my bitter broken body,
i wish i could live a new life,
but my eyes cant see,
whats you with out me?,
you've gone away for good, and you dont care anymore,
and that lays me to rest.
Copyright ©
Nick_85Ingram
... [
2003-12-10 13:29:56]
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Re: The Taste Of the End (white sheet)
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by ArdRi79 on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 03:28:32 PM AEST
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| I like how you broke up the flow of the poem it is like the fracured final thoughts of a person dying, I like "I bleed sorrow" nice work. |
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