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My Paradise
Contributed by
SkYYBLu
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Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 04:17:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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My mind paints pictures of what never was
Laughing at memories I have made up
Harsh reality stirrs me from a long slumber
My heart; frozen and torn apart
From belief lies and deceit
Walking under the sun I feel a presence
Watching me within my woe
Colors become more vivid
Luring me with their splendour
Every breath is valueless
I cherish things taken for granted
As the sun sets on a day in my paradise
Coming to nothing I find myself lone
Cold and alone without a purpose
'Tis too late to depend on the fire of passion
My flame has been snuffed out by my tears
Recollecting all of the years wasted in exile
With my own free will I escape the world
Visiting my paradise once again
I am greeted with merciful rain
Blood is washed away
Dreams, hopes, and desires are gone forever
As I find satisfaction in a world never real
Copyright ©
SkYYBLu
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2003-12-10 16:17:13]
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Re: My Paradise
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 12:51:54 AM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
Hang tuff.
peace, joy, luv, hope,
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