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Alluded Passions
Contributed by
jme
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Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 05:15:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Must I speak another word
These useless sentences go unheard
I refuse to whisper in your ear
For my passions you do not hear
They lay alone upon your soul
Waiting patiently for you to know
That deep inside my love still grows
Copyright ©
jme
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2003-12-10 17:15:47]
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Re: Alluded Passions
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 08:53:23 PM AEST
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| Hmmm, I like it. Simple, yet its simplicity gives it strength. Nicely and artfully done. |
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Re: Alluded Passions
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:35:49 PM AEST
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Lost love in ways other than the obvious.... they can still be there and yet still be lost too.... neat thought. Atleast, that's what I derived from the write. I think this is very well done. Great write.
God bless,
Ellen
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