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In the Dark
Contributed by
jondgreat
on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 08:55:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Why does it hurt to miss you?
I keep remembering the day I kissed you.
When can I just feel the beat of your heart,
Instead of lying alone in the dark?
Ive been remembering a moment like this,
Being so close I can feel your heart beat,
Tasting your lips with each long kiss,
While I am edging off your car seat.
Cherishing seconds while holding you near,
Wispering in your ear "I'llmiss you"
While holding back each tear,
I've waited so long for a girl like you.
After I left and shut the car door,
I watched you drive away,
While tear drops hit the floor,
I am waiting to hold you another day.
Lying alone in my bed,
While holding your past letters.
Reading every word she ever said,
Oh how I wish I was lying next to her.
This missing you hurts because I love you,
Soon I'll forget the days I missed you,
When I feel the beat of your heart,
While I am holding you in the dark.
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jondgreat
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2003-12-10 20:55:14]
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Re: In the Dark
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 09:40:58 PM AEST
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So sad but very good writing!
Good luck, hang tuff!
peace, joy, luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: In the Dark
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 10th December 2003 @ 10:17:00 PM AEST
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| Your poem made me cry! I never have felt like this from a poem! A guy like you is so hard to find and this is such an emotional poem and I love it! Keep em coming and I hope that you find her again and get her in your arms or atleast someone who will make you forget about her! Love:::Kirby |
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Re: In the Dark
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 03:35:24 PM AEST
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| You write something so great yet can leave such negative feedback... Interesting. I am not sure what to think of you now. |
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Re: In the Dark
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by jme on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 10:12:36 AM AEST
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| Sad. I liked it. The feelings jumped right off the page. |
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