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I'm Bleeding and I'm Laughing
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 09:09:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm Bleeding and I'm Laughing
I talk to you.
My heart is bleeding, and I'm crying
...with dry eyes.
My heart
drips slowly
down the screen
for you to see...
I'm sorry
Oh, so am I
I am so
tired
of this, I
can't
handle this anymore!!
My vision implodes,
but still, the tears refuse
to come...
My mind is bleeding, and I'm screaming
"What am I supposed to do???"
Just suck it up, you say,
Just suck it up, you say,
Oh, really?
Alright.
Then the flashing of steel,
in a flash, how I feel
so much better...
And now,
I'm bleeding and I'm laughing...
With lips always alone
I breathe to the crimson heartbeat
And I suck it up
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2003-12-11 09:09:27]
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Re: I'm Bleeding and I'm Laughing
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by MissLee on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 10:01:24 AM AEST
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Please I hope you see
If you are don't do this for me
I care for you alot my dear
But now I fear
I've hurt you
Now what am I supposed to do? |
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Re: I'm Bleeding and I'm Laughing
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 10:34:17 AM AEST
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| wow... that's really sad but nicely expressed |
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Re: I'm Bleeding and I'm Laughing
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 10:54:18 AM AEST
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| I dunno if I understand this but there are so many interpretations to this write. I loved how it was expressed though it had an incredibly sad tone to it. |
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Re: I'm Bleeding and I'm Laughing
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 12:45:29 PM AEST
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Whoa.
The beautiful thing about poetry is a poem can have a special meaning to the author, an entirely different special meaning to one of the readers, and a third special meaning to another.
This poem meant a lot to me. Probably in a totally different way then it meant to you while writing it, and a different way from the other commentors and readers.
And since you could probably say, with honesty, "this poem hit everyone who read it, made an impact for everyone, each on a different level", all I can say is this:
Congratulations. This is poetry.
Nice job. |
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Re: I'm Bleeding and I'm Laughing
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by Jeff9Man on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:05:55 PM AEST
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| I like this poem. to those of us who have been there, it's like a memory. and to those of us who haven't, it's an insight. thank you. |
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Re: I'm Bleeding and I'm Laughing
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 09:01:54 PM AEST
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this cut me deep (no pun intended). I totally know where yer at the loneliness and the fear of giving in and rendering yourself a failure. I cut myself about a month ago and that was the first time for me since June and I don't know what I'm getting at except that I can feel yer pain man. Hang tight.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: I'm Bleeding and I'm Laughing
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 05:16:48 PM AEST
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just to clarify it was about lonliness, but not about giving up and seeming a failure...
ill-timed girl problems, adding to stress and depression and adding a nice sizzling ***** the f*ck off feeling quite assisted my decision |
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