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DANCE WITH ME
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 02:18:48 PM in AEST
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DANCE WITH ME
On the ship she stepped like into a dream
He mind in turmoil like a violent stream
In her memory had not forgot his smile
Never could she forget his attire vogue style
The music began to play her body did sway
She remember their love in a heartfelt way
Her heart was beating with the rhythm in time
Felt like she was floating feelings sublime
Oh how she loved him could not believe it true
His every move enchanting his eyes so blue
Watching him dance from far across the floor
His adorable blue eyes, wanting him more and more
He looked like prince charming out of a fairytale
Locked in a bubble where no dragons prevailed
The princess left in darkness to not even touch
The face of the man she loved so very much
She swirled on the floor, was twisted around
In her magnificent ivory coloured ball gown
Lips slowly pressed against her bare shoulder
Her skin tingled at his touch her beholder
Such a magical night such romance in his soul
Holding on to her real tight just wanting to console
They seem to move together with every heartbeat
She would remember this night with such replete
Love
Angelxxxxxx
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sweetangeluk
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Re: DANCE WITH ME
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by Kie on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:05:37 PM AEST
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Awwww, so very endearing....
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Re: DANCE WITH ME
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:16:10 PM AEST
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Just like a fairy tale =) The style is so storybook, it's just so sweet and adorable. Except not a corny storybook style, but a romantic one. If the words you used weren't so elaborate and ornate, then it would be corny. But it's not..... it's great.
You did very well =)
God bless,
Ellen
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Re: DANCE WITH ME
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by shelby on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 05:00:24 PM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: DANCE WITH ME
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 05:13:20 PM AEST
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| Yep, I gotta agree pretty romantic. I liked this one too. Just missed it earlier. Heh. |
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Re: DANCE WITH ME
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 02:12:21 PM AEST
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Great poem. This is a great poem and the Cinderella theme can be seem through out.
I hope this is a dream that will come true for you. |
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