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Pit of Deceit
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 03:01:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sinking below to the pit of deception
I'm searching... searching for something
and along the way I see your face . You stare at me straight in the eyes as if you weren't telling a lie
As you spoke the pit pulls you down even further and pushes me farther away
I scream your name only to find it's in bitter vain
Rough edges of the night soothing through my sullen dreams
sinking below to the Pit of decption, I search for something... along the way I find you staring straight at me through your eyes...
so straight just as if you never lied
Jenna
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Re: Pit of Deceit
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 03:32:24 PM AEST
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| That was sooo interesting... I want to say things certain ways but I fear it would be taken as offense... This just wowed me... |
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Re: Pit of Deceit
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by Jeff9Man on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 03:57:28 PM AEST
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| very good, i like this one. i'm drawn to anything i feel is driven by strong emotion. you have talent. |
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Re: Pit of Deceit
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:21:09 PM AEST
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good title enjoyed this. I guess this could be about many things anything that drags u down. if I may ask who were u writing about?
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Re: Pit of Deceit
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 10:16:31 PM AEST
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| Extremely good...if I may say so myself....Just to ask....Do you still trust this person? o_O |
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