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Untitled.. coudln't think of a title for it
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 03:07:15 PM in AEST
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I sit and think of all the time flying by
All the time I wished away for something that isn't
something that cannot be
I'm not interesting like the rest
somethings never there with me
I'm Weird
I'm DUMB
I can't see things within the grasp of the sun
I dream of things that are to come
I speak of things
I don't always understand
I know what I want
I don't know who I am
JENNA
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2003-12-11 15:07:15]
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Re: Untitled.. coudln't think of a title for it
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:08:12 PM AEST
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This is a bit different than the run of the mill self-perception poem..... it's not too cliche I don't think. I have a title suggestion.... may I? Well, since this is about looking at yourself in a negative way, I'd suggest "Why Can't I Be...?" Just a thought =)
It was a lovely write Jenna ; )
God bless,
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Re: Untitled.. coudln't think of a title for it
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:22:35 PM AEST
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sounds like me. I hope you wrote all yer anger against this person out. Keep yer chin up and don't let stupid, careless, unfeeling, ppl get u down...
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Re: Untitled.. coudln't think of a title for it
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by venkat on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 01:39:41 AM AEST
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| well done.. |
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Re: Untitled.. coudln't think of a title for it
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 12:54:09 PM AEST
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Good write...
If I may, I also have a title suggestion....
how about:
"Within The Grasp of The Sun" |
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Re: Untitled.. coudln't think of a title for it
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by eternal_sorrows on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 07:55:53 AM AEST
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Yea, I have problems titling my work as well alot of times...lol
Nice write!
ES |
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