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cast away
Contributed by
merry
on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:37:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i caught my reflection passing
in dark fathomless windows
streetlamp triumphs over darkness
walking in cold apprehensive steps
afraid of what my heart demands
not willing to give so much
for so very little in return
it is my own perverted thinking
leading me on this dark excursion
black waters eddy under the bridge
singing a chorus that beckons me
to float into this lover's arms
so strong and cold and silently
forever is a long long time, i say
there is no change of heart, he warns
as my frozen hands grip the cold steel rail
the icy wind begins to wail
a funeral song in memory
of all the dreams that failed to be
in disappointments collectively
drop upon the waters flow
i cast myself down below
into icy overflowing rivulet
whose harsh kiss steals my breath
now bound to him in blessed death
gmm2003
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merry
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2003-12-11 16:37:20]
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Re: cast away
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by jme on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:41:55 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written. I love poetry with such emotions. |
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Re: cast away
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:44:47 PM AEST
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| i felt the icy wind blowing through my hair staring down at the waters below.......very very good write!!!! |
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Re: cast away
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by shelby on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 05:02:13 PM AEST
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I felt every single emotions so vividly
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Re: cast away
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 05:14:52 PM AEST
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Such emotion, always such emotion. I feel the tragic sadness and despair. Amazing talent.!
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Re: cast away
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 05:17:48 PM AEST
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| That was an excellent write. You took me there right along with you. |
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Re: cast away
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 09:58:41 AM AEST
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| brilliant writing here, wow wow, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: cast away
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 04:50:29 PM AEST
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wow someone who doesn't like dark/suicide poetry should read this. This was breathtaking...
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Re: cast away
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by Zee on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 04:42:04 PM AEST
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Written with full of emotions!! Beautiful!!
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