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Bonded Eternally
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 06:47:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Burning passion, intense desire and heat
In dim lighted room our eyes meet
I push her locks aside to caress her beautiful face
Euphoria flows throughout as we fall into embrace
Unquestionable love standing frozen in time
Our lips come together in a kiss so sublime
I feel a chill right down to my soul
Overpowering emotions completely take control
Deep primal urges, through my mind they run
As our bodies press together and meld into one
Our limbs serpentine as we intertwine
At that moment you know my heart is thine
A breathtaking expression of the love between us
Far greater than anything crafted by Morpheus
Like the pounding ocean waves on a sunset shore
To feel you from inside sends a shiver to my core
The feelings of security to dissipate any doubt
Unwavering love for you, inside and out
Walking down that dream-like sunset shore
At last we are bonded, pledged forevermore
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Re: Bonded Eternally
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 12:46:09 AM AEST
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Oh Dan, I kid you not.....this was absolutely divine...how could anyone if on line miss this most beauteous of all writes....Serpentine.
I'm not just saying this, because I know you are blue over this write....it was kind, gentle, loving, deep, and just right!
You are a very sensitive soul, VS....and these kind of writes tell me that. You should write these more often....even if no one ever comments.....these are you, VS.....and what a beautiful soul to mold even more.
Exquisite Delight!
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Re: Bonded Eternally
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by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 02:01:53 PM AEST
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Oooooh, I like this one! "Our limbs serpentine as we intertwine"-- beautiful images here, V.S. Gotta agree with Connie, though-- please write some more of these, even if no one comments. A lot of people don't have time, so just read them-- they're still hit by this whether they comment or not. Write for yourself, if not for your appreciative audience . . .
Okay, lecture/pep rally is done now!
Nice job.
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Re: Bonded Eternally
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by Kie on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 12:32:07 PM AEST
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Yet another of my favorites! You have so much talent and it humbles me, yet beckons me to read on.
"Like the pounding ocean waves on a sunset shore
To feel you from inside sends a shiver to my core"
Those two lines left me breathless.
Kie
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Re: Bonded Eternally
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:10:23 PM AEST
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Yes, yes - take those previous two quotes and they'd be mine, were I not saving space for others.
Powerful and evocative, to the core.
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