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the remorse of a tiger
Contributed by
full_blur
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Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 04:01:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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the remorse of a tiger is happenstance
bloody toothed frown broken by saliva storms
he pulls aside the useless ephemeria
and licks the underbelly of a dwindling being
we peer timidly through jungle lashes
and encounter the golden iris of serenity
a twist of the head, a glance for that instance
a tear streaks through scarlet paws
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Re: the remorse of a tiger
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by venkat on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 05:21:52 AM AEST
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Oh, very nice, this poem captures the beauty of wild life.. venkat
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Re: the remorse of a tiger
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by Ruby1987 on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 05:49:23 AM AEST
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| B-E-A-utiful. As i red this it felt as if i was there watching. Excellent! |
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Re: the remorse of a tiger
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by Ramfire on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 05:40:14 PM AEST
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| I can just see that tiger eating its prey. You've done a great job of showing us what jungle life is really like. |
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Re: the remorse of a tiger
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 01:28:38 AM AEST
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| YES THE FLOW OF THIS IS SO SWEET SO BEAUTIFUL... |
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Re: the remorse of a tiger
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:43:49 PM AEST
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| I like this...reminds me of my cat stalking out in the yard...good write. |
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