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Cut
Contributed by
broken_wings
on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 07:28:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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One Cut
Two cut
Three cut
Four
Blood is dripping on the floor
Five cut
Six cut
Seven cut
Eight
I lie here waiting for my fate
Nine cut
Ten cut
Eleven cut
Twelve
All you people will go to hell
One blade
Shiny
Cutting through
Twevlve cuts gleaming
Bleeding anew
Covered in stains
Covered in tears
No more horrible
Suffering years
Just cut that vein
Over there
Everything will be over
And no one will care
One cut
Two cut
Three cut
Four
I cant live my life anymore
Five cut
Six cut
Seven cut
Eight
All Im feeling is deep red hate
Nine cut
Ten cut
Eleven Cut
Twelve
Im slowly killing off myself
Now Im dead
But whats one cut
More or
Less?
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Re: Cut
(User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 08:51:32 PM AEST
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| i really like the way you did a spin off of a nursery rhyme. makes you think about how the innocence of childhood has been long forgotten, and how much harder it is to be happy... i dont know... i really like it though. bravo. |
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Re: Cut
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 01:18:48 PM AEST
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| I must agree you really made that work perfectly. I like how you did it. |
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