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Bad Day
Contributed by
stalkee
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Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 01:33:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It seems like everyday is a bad day,
and they will not ever go away
It seems like the world is on my case,
I can feel the tears stream down my face
I hide all my pain behind my smile,
it's all a lie, my days are just vile
And I am smiling on the outside,
while on the inside I slowly die,
'cause all of my days what start out well,
always, everytime, just end up in hell
And there is no longer anything,
that can pick me up and make me sing
Copyright ©
stalkee
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2003-12-13 01:33:20]
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Re: Bad Day
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 06:09:17 AM AEST
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Truer words have never been written. I really enjoyed this, 'cause I feel the same way. Great poem!
Truly,
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Re: Bad Day
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by harshreality on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 08:08:39 PM AEST
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I know this feeling all to well,
Opened up to feelings long denied,
knew it was a mistake....
Drove myself into my own personal hell...
( with a little help)
Thanks for the ride Jamey....
It was great!! =( |
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Re: Bad Day
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by harshreality on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 08:11:08 PM AEST
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| This is a feeling I can relate to, probably not for the same reasons you wrote it, but it still touched me on a personal level. I hope things get better for you. |
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