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CONFUSED
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 09:03:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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CONFUSED
Alone she sits waiting for his return
The love inside her still burns
She wonder's what's taking him so long
Is that him whistling, is that their song
The darkness illuminates a full moon
The light reflections at twelve noon
Memories drown out her confusion
All looks so beautiful this is no illusion
"Did they have a big fight"
A little confused her mind has become
Why oh why hasn't he come home
Maybe on his travels does like to roam
Sitting by the window, missing him so
He went out a very long time ago
Wanting him to be by her side
She looked so beautiful as his bride
She looks at her fingers all wrinkled and old
Remembers the ring is fifty years old
A tear slowly falls upon her soft rosy cheek
Many years have flown, seems to her like a week
By xxAngelxx
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sweetangeluk
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2003-12-13 09:03:55]
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Re: CONFUSED
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by mercedes on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 10:22:40 AM AEST
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| This is a good write, its sweet and sad. |
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Re: CONFUSED
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 12:58:22 AM AEST
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| That is soo sad and cute and aww... I like it |
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Re: CONFUSED
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by jme on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 09:43:15 AM AEST
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| I enjoy your storytelling. You are very good. |
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Re: CONFUSED
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by cryingonmyporch on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 01:15:43 PM AEST
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Very beautiful write! I wish I could write pretty poems like this one.
Amy |
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