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THE LIGHT OF DAY
Contributed by
Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau
on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 02:03:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I used to have a friend
a friend so good to me.
I felt like I could fly so high
it felt nice to be free.
Reality and life sank in
it crushed my carefree dream.
I felt like time was running out
like coffee filled with cream.
I used to have an enemy
the price I paid for trust.
She used to be a real good friend;
I knew that it would bust.
My world and dreams came crashing down
like broken glass it fell.
It felt like I was being drowned
by the water in a well.
But now I have recovered with
the help of a great friend.
he brought me to the light of day
and knew the dark would end.
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Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau
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2003-12-13 14:03:14]
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Re: THE LIGHT OF DAY
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by desertrose on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 03:04:35 PM AEST
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Great write you describe depression , alone feelings how friends help :)
Rose
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