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Vanish
Contributed by
FadingSoul
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Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:13:14 AM in AEST
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Hold me with a prayer
hold me with your thoughts
although I mean
nothing to you
you know i'm falling appart
hold me with your thoughts
lie me by your side
vanished in your mind
but i'll never feel the pain you feel
I ask the question for no reply
whats the point in living
if your never by my side
it all vanishes before me
before me
everything is changing
you were everything that
helped my through the worst days
looks like things always change
you left me at your feet
hold me with your thoughts
lie me by your side
vanished in your mind
but i'll never feel the pain
in your life
sense the feeling deep inside
locked away you always hide
till the day I set you free
into the pain you bring
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FadingSoul
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2003-12-14 10:13:14]
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Re: Vanish
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by Malice on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:25:18 AM AEST
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| This is really a very wonderful song. I hope the girl that ripped you apart will appreciate it and realize what she has done wrong. |
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Re: Vanish
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 11:23:58 AM AEST
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| it may of hurt but looking on the bright side it gave you one heck of an inspiration that turned into a great song. im really sorry you had to get hurt in the procese tho |
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Re: Vanish
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 11:25:19 AM AEST
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| it may of hurt but looking on the bright side it gave you one heck of an inspiration that turned into a great song. im really sorry you had to get hurt in the procese tho |
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Re: Vanish
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 04:17:10 PM AEST
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wow! this is very beautifully written .. and well expressed.. I know these feelings from my past.. I hope you feel much better now..
peace joy and hope
JENNA |
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Re: Vanish
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by desertrose on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 05:01:06 PM AEST
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Fading beautiful poem.No girl is with your tears and the one you find who is she is never gonna make you cry
Rose
http://www.todays-woman.net |
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Re: Vanish
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:14:50 PM AEST
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AHH, THE PLEASURE AND THE PAIN OF RELATIONSHIPS....WELL DONE I FEEL YOUR PAIN.
THE WIND.... |
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