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A HOUSE OF CARDS
Contributed by
Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau
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Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 05:29:31 PM in AEST
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I feel out of control.
I don't know what to do.
My life came down like a house of cards
and all because of you.
I thought my life was stable.
I thought my happiness was safe,
but to get you in, you were able
and so my life came crashing down.
A house of cards is very weak;
Not like the life I seemed to seek.
But then I fell in love
so deep, so very true.
My life is like a house of cards,
and all because I love you.
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Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau
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2003-12-14 17:29:31]
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Re: A HOUSE OF CARDS
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by desertrose on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 06:11:03 PM AEST
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Hannah pretty name Did you know house of cards is a song and your poem does the title great justice as this is a great poem. If you have never listen to the song you should :)
Rose
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