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In Full View
Contributed by
Logositry
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Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 06:04:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We must stand on our mountain peak,
before we surrender to the valley.
Never giving up a hard-earned inch,
until, alas, it is taken from us.
To exist and dwell where the tangible tarry,
sojourning life intensely, saturated with time.
And shuddering at the mention of age upon us,
we live everywhere, going nowhere fast, then.
Rotted disguise, this gangrene image in the glass,
this mask of time, marching triumphant against us.
Not willing to acknowledge this token of pursuing fate,
we recruit lies, to justify our disguise.
My spine weakens as sparks peck my brain,
yet, this is truth, like-- a bird without wings cannot fly.
So towards the valley we inaugurate our surrender,
inching down backwards, keeping our peak in full view.
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Logositry
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2002-08-29 06:04:20]
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Re: In Full View
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 06:28:23 AM AEST
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well written
nicely done |
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Re: In Full View
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:57:48 AM AEST
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i enjoyed this poem, but i did notice one thing ... you have excellent first two sentences, which are full of imagery ... but the followup 2 seem to fall at a lower plane. anywho, enjoyed the poem!
-sean |
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