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destructions.
Contributed by
apollo
on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 01:24:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Tantalizing array of beauty, shaded and ocular.
This vision of wondrous spectrum is 20-20 now.
Until that one unfortunate.
Fading are the bright lights and sharp images we once possessed.
Forgotten is tomorrow, dead is yesterday.
Today? it is not here, quite sad however.
No time is good time.
Goodness is the feeling of a job well failed.
Getting used to it takes little time,
as continuing failed attempts destroy my existence.. . as no one.
Give up, give up, destroyed.
Copyright ©
apollo
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2003-12-15 13:24:10]
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Re: destructions.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 01:32:19 PM AEST
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wow! this is a beautiful write on lost love or never getting to feel true love again. its very sad.. but you will find love someday again.. Never give up hope... great poem!
peace joy and hope
JENNA |
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Re: destructions.
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by desertrose on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 02:18:45 PM AEST
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It is better to have felt love then never felt it at all. From our hurts failed love lost jobs failed friendship we take this and it makes us stronger and wiser lol in our next relationship. Remember your true love will be the one who never makes you cry . Thank you for your words to me Somedays just the words from a stranger can lift you when your life feels worthless
Rose
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Re: destructions.
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by Asatru on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 05:43:07 PM AEST
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| atleast you gave it a shot man. imagion never having that? To never had even tried, and be asking "what if" for how many years there are to come. |
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Re: destructions.
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by SkYYBLu on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 08:46:16 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel... ...this is a beautiful poem. Don't give up! |
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Re: destructions.
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by krismisevski on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 06:12:57 PM AEST
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It's an easy thing to say, but everything fades with time, pain does too. If you can create something from it, then it's beauty. Take it for what it is, inspiration. It helps me.
-kris |
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