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-Sinking Ship-
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 07:53:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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ive trown the switch
time after time
im swining
from the gallows
i swear ill never
wear a smile for you
again
sun comes down
on me
the red sky
spells a new beging
a shadow hang on my face
a bitter romancce you never gave
a passing glance
(never gave a fighting chance)
as i habg from the lonley gallows
i say my final words
"he never loved you"
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TaintedOptomist
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2003-12-15 19:53:31]
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Re: -Sinking Ship-
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by todayswoman on
Monday, 15th December 2003 @ 08:06:04 PM AEST
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Quite a few spelling errors on a great poem I corrected them for you . I hope you don't mind. My spelling sucks lol. So when someone fixes mine I enjoy it hope you do. This poem was great I pmed you the fixes
Hugs Rose
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Re: -Sinking Ship-
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:25:20 AM AEST
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| This ***** was awesome. have you ever thought about writng lyrics for bands. if i ever get stuck or need some lyrics i am coming to you. |
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