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The swan Labuť
Contributed by
Aika
on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 03:46:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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white swan just alighted on the deep lake she does not know,what comes, poor huge powers are looming they re intending to trap her
quietly looking around, she does not suppose,what is down there suddenly she feels quivering but does not know what it means
darkness with evil are coming to her snow-white swan,looks so lovely the darkness has grudge against her beauty the evil relishes to tear off her heart
the swan heaves a groan when her whiteness the evil enwraps with black when evil so cutting and virulent blunts her wings and binds her legs
pulling innocent swan under the water virulence penetrates her heart and in a while... blood from her heart colours the water of lake
in the deep forest, dark lake only a plumule and blood in the lake from the swan - so innocent so chilly silence, foreboding when a flock of swans alighted......
bl labuť na temn hlubok jezero dosedla, jete nev co ji ček, chuděra mocn sly se k hladině spaj labuť polapit hodlaj
klidně rozhl se kolem netu co děje se pod n, tam dole nhle uct chvěn, co to znamen zatm vak netu
to temnota se zlem bl se k n labuť sněhobl na hladině se skv zvid temnota jej jasnost spanilou zlo si libuje, jak labuti srdce vyrvou
najednou labuť zastn kdy jej bělost čern svou obal temnota kdy zlo bodav a jedovat j křdla ochrom a nohy sve
stahuj labuť nevinnou pod hladinu jedovatost pronikne srdcem a za vteřinu.... krev ze srdce labuti hladinu jezera obarv
v hlubokm lese, jezero temn z labuti jasn, jen peřcko a krev na hladině mraziv ticho nech tuit zlo kdy v tom , hejno labut dosedlo....... ..
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Aika
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2003-12-16 03:46:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The swan Labuť
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 04:26:22 AM AEST (User
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Aahgh..pitiable situation..good write. venkat |
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Re: The swan Labuť
(User Rating: 1 ) by Redlantern2051 on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 08:07:17 AM AEST (User
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Poor little swan!!!! :-( Good stuff+++++ |
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Re: The swan Labuť
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 11:58:46 AM AEST (User
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Very tragic, I was hoping you would resurrect her! I still like your loving poetry better!
Love you,
ConSue |
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