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FOOTSTEPS IN THE SNOW
Contributed by
lovingcritters
on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 05:10:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A newborn gasps for breath....
Freshly fallen snow,
unblemished canvas.
Questioning for a litetime.....
Which steps sublime?
Numerous, easy to follow
Or those hard to find?
Tread deep ones, or shallow,
untouched and fallow?
Free or borrow?
Joyful or sorrow?
Track with care?
Wealthy, or welfare?
Over by the fence,
cramped and narrow.
Daring, with bravado.
Courageous, noble,
Truthful, and cruel.
Stubble, then stumble,
Maintain balance, tumble.
Straight, hard to track.
With heavy backpack.
Hope is the gate....
Accept, no berate.
Faith, with endruance.
Tenacity midst interference.
Footseps in the snow
cramped and narrow
Simple eye with blinders
Concentrate, irresponsible
not welcome.
Few succeed,
many succumb.
Squeeze through the gate,
Fortitude, no stalemates
Free to pass, tickets,
life's hard crevasse,
Your choice,
Unfailing love,
surpass.
Follow the footsteps in the snow.
Those gently left....and kindly so....
Be His Shadow.
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
December 2003
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2003-12-16 17:10:10]
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Re: FOOTSTEPS IN THE SNOW
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 05:50:27 PM AEST
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Incredible poem
Breathtaking remarkable words
Truly wonderful poem
I loved it
Love
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Re: FOOTSTEPS IN THE SNOW
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 06:28:36 PM AEST
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I am seconding the first comment. I could have not summed it up any better. It's just amazing sometimes what the mind can see while reading what another writes...
Kie |
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Re: FOOTSTEPS IN THE SNOW
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:01:51 AM AEST
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| hope is the gate.......and your words show the way........ |
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Re: FOOTSTEPS IN THE SNOW
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:35:22 AM AEST
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Insanely good poem. I'm thoroughly impressed with the visuals this left in my head. I could close my eyes and follow the trail...
Truly,
V.S. |
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Re: FOOTSTEPS IN THE SNOW
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 10:39:18 AM AEST
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There is a time when you can follow. Don't leave it too late lest the snow melts.
You have an unfaillingly beautiful imagination.
bob |
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Re: FOOTSTEPS IN THE SNOW
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 03:25:22 PM AEST
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WOW!
What an incredible write.
I enjoyed reading it.
*S* Cynthia |
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