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Grandpa can you hear me?
Contributed by
irshprnss
on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 08:05:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Grandpa please dont leave me
Im not ready to say goodbye
Maybe it is selfish
But to let go I have tried
So grandpa please dont leave me
Alone here to cry
Grandpa believe me
Im not ready for goodbye
Grandpa whyd you leave me
I wasnt ready for goodbye
I know that its selfish
But know that I have tried
So grandpa whyd you leave me
In my pain to cry
Grandpa believe me
I wasnt ready for goodbye
Grandpa can you hear me?
I need to say goodbye
I know I was selfish
But ive seen it through your eyes
So grandpa can you hear me?
Alone I sit and cry
Grandpa believe me
Its hard........I say goodbye
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2003-12-16 20:05:06]
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Re: Grandpa can you hear me?
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by olive on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 10:10:45 PM AEST
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| I recently lost a grandparent too.....my sympathies....but, as I see it, pain is often good for poetry. Hope you feel better soon. Best Wishes~olive |
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Re: Grandpa can you hear me?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 12:09:38 AM AEST
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This is really touching and so sad. I'm sorry for your loss...Stay strong....your Grandpa would have wanted you to...
My thoughts are with you and your family..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Grandpa can you hear me?
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:46:37 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry for this. I hope things get better soon. It was beautifuly written. Great write regaurdless of the loss. |
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