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I might remember you
Contributed by
lalitk
on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:22:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In solitude
If I sit and think long enough
I might remember you.
I might remember
the way you smiled at me,
for that brief instant
I might see
your radiant face,
I might feel the caress
of your soft tresses on my shoulder.
I may even reach out,
to feel your hand in mine.
Alas,in vain.
I ripped through the pages of the calender
tearing asunder the days, months, years
that will never come
when I will hear your voice again
if only for one last time.
my heart choking at the thought
that I may never see you again.
I clear my head
open my eyes
one last puff on the cigarette,
and in the billowing smoke,
gone is the love
that you never felt for me.
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lalitk
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2003-12-17 11:22:20]
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Re: I might remember you
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by jme on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:29:39 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. Loved your words. |
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Re: I might remember you
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:37:58 AM AEST
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| Very nice hon, I can really relate to " gone is the love that you never felt for me" and I have ripped up my calendar as well. |
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Re: I might remember you
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by Aloak on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 12:07:48 PM AEST
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| verry good, i love the way that you caputer missing some one that you loved. i have never felted this my self, but my time will come. good job |
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Re: I might remember you
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 12:35:57 PM AEST
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a very touching write well done
michelle |
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Re: I might remember you
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by MissTea on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 02:27:59 PM AEST
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| Brought back many memories of a Love I once felt that was not returned! Beautiful poem for it brings out the beauty of a learnt pain! |
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Re: I might remember you
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by GoodGirl on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:52:44 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful poem. I really enjoyed it. |
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Re: I might remember you
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 11:02:18 PM AEST
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| Very interesting write. I liked it. |
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